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#301 Ahmi_Jai

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    Posted 06 Jun 13 - 10:07 PM

    wow... I'm surprise you could understand what I tried to express.. 

    lol it's just a poem.. the opposite of my reality. but thanks for liking it~

     

    Haha why are you surprised?? If those are feelings or images that you are trying to convey and I felt it or can understand it... doesn't that mean you succeeded? I think it gives hopes to others when you read this cos even when you feel like there is no way out and however desperate you feel, we are reassured by the fact that there will be a light at the end of the tunnel, we just need to make our way towards it :D


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    Posted 07 Jun 13 - 07:44 AM

    Your newest poem sounds like a short, sweet love story. Trying to beat all odds just to be the one you love :) Keep up the positive thoughts!!


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    " The situation happening in front of me, part of a bright world - is that "love"?
    If it is like that - then I want to obtain "love"
    I envy those with "love". I am too lonely, too miserable.
    Even though it's just right in front of me, I can't touch it.
    I am unable to obtain it. "
     

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    Posted 07 Jun 13 - 04:29 PM

    Haha why are you surprised?? If those are feelings or images that you are trying to convey and I felt it or can understand it... doesn't that mean you succeeded? I think it gives hopes to others when you read this cos even when you feel like there is no way out and however desperate you feel, we are reassured by the fact that there will be a light at the end of the tunnel, we just need to make our way towards it :D

    guess so. haha xD you sound like a pro commentator. lol 

    I try to challenge a new type of poem that have a different ending than usual and this is the result.. hehe

     

     

    Your newest poem sounds like a short, sweet love story. Trying to beat all odds just to be the one you love :) Keep up the positive thoughts!!

    thanks lala ^^ but I don't know if I can keep in writing this type of poem. it's difficult but I'll try.


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    Posted 08 Jun 13 - 07:59 PM

    Very nice.


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    Posted 09 Jun 13 - 04:07 PM

    Very nice.

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    Posted 11 Jun 13 - 07:45 PM

    Let me give u a big bearhug! sis that's so nice and I love it.... different from others. I enjoyed it very much! I could feel all those feelings. hope to read more ^_^


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    Posted 13 Jun 13 - 02:26 AM

    Let me give u a big bearhug! sis that's so nice and I love it.... different from others. I enjoyed it very much! I could feel all those feelings. hope to read more ^_^

    awww my cute lil goli~~ *big bearhugs* I want to do something different and it seems to be a success. 

    I will post more, don't worry. thanks ^^


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    Posted 07 Sep 13 - 08:03 PM

    20. Unanswered Riddle

     

    The first year when we met,

    I was with someone else,

    Arguments were my daily conversations,

    You helped me through and we became friends.

     

    In the midst of the second year, I broke up with him,

     While in the pain of sadness,

    You were here for me,

    Encouraging me with your words.

     

    At the end of the second year,

    We still contacted and met with each other

    Wishing for each other’s happiness

    I thought I could forget you but I was wrong.

     

    On the fourth year,

    We were absorbed in our studies,

    But we still met when we had time,

    You gave me a riddle and my feelings became stronger.

     

    On the fifth year,

    We became distant,

    But my feelings grew stronger than before,

    All I could do was wait.

     

    On the sixth year,

    My feelings are still here with me,

    We hadn't contacted each other,

    I keep waiting but will we be together?

     

    It’s already been six years since we first met,

    The riddle you gave me is still unsolved,

    When will you give me the answer?

    Are our hearts still connected?


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    Posted 08 Sep 13 - 02:05 AM

    :icon_help: Ruka-channnn this reminds me so much of an anime and it feels like I'm watching this sad love unfold and deepen but feel powerless to help? I have an urge to confront this boy and ask him why is he so fickle?! I just think that at this current time, the riddle should be left unanswered so the protagonist can move on. Cos finding out the answer may make them remain in the past? *bearhugs* I loved this poem a lot and I know I may have said it about another poem but I think this maybe my favourite XDD


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    Posted 08 Sep 13 - 07:19 AM

    Awwwww I super love the metaphor of the unsolved riddle - this poem has so many layers of meaning, it's fantastic~!! ♥
    I also love the poetic flow and emotional expression, as usual. My dear Hanna, you have a future as a poet! ;)

    At this point, I would like to urge our heroine *nudge nudge Hanna-chan :P* to make her feelings known to the boy. No-one knows what tomorrow will bring.
    My little dose of wisdom for the day: *Yoda voice* a moment of embarrassment is far better than a lifetime of regret~! ♥
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    Posted 08 Sep 13 - 08:39 AM

    :panda_cry: :panda_cry: Ruka sis It's filled with emotions..... :panda_cry: :panda_cry: :panda_love:

     

    20. Unanswered Riddle

     

    The first year when we met,

    I was with someone else,

    Arguments were my daily conversations,

    You helped me through and we became friends.

     

    In the midst of the second year, I broke up with him,

     While in the pain of sadness,

    You were here for me,

    Encouraging me with your words.

     

    At the end of the second year,

    We still contacted and met with each other

    Wishing for each other’s happiness

    I thought I could forget you but I was wrong.

     

    On the fourth year,

    We were absorbed in our studies,

    But we still met when we had time,

    You gave me a riddle and my feelings became stronger.

     

    On the fifth year,

    We became distant,

    But my feelings grew stronger than before,

    All I could do was wait.

     

    On the sixth year,

    My feelings are still here with me,

    We hadn't contacted each other,

    I keep waiting but will we be together?

     

    It’s already been six years since we first met,

    The riddle you gave me is still unsolved,

    When will you give me the answer?

    Are our hearts still connected?

     

    I hope you get the answer ^_^ Because if you don't, I will go and ask him! I will do it for sure!

     


    My little dose of wisdom for the day: *Yoda voice* a moment of embarrassment is far better than a lifetime of regret~! ♥

    Ruka sis listen to mona sis! she is SOOOO right! a moment of embarrassment is FAR FAR better than a lifetime of regret! :panda_nod:  :panda_nod:  *Bearhugsss ruka* fighting lovely sis! :panda_love: :panda_lookthere:

    And I really like the first part. And of course great as always!!! keep it up!! :panda_hearts:


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    Posted 09 Sep 13 - 05:54 AM

    thanks everyone. ^^ I don't know if I can tell him and I don't really want to tell him. 

    I'll move on and just let it be.


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    Posted 10 Sep 13 - 02:56 PM

    I'm still surprised how good you are in expressing your emotions in your poems, Ruka-senpai. I'm always in awe with people who do poems because I can never imagine myself doing one as good as this. :)

     

    thanks everyone. ^^ I don't know if I can tell him and I don't really want to tell him. 

    I'll move on and just let it be.

    Well, I hope things turn out for the good because like Mona-chan's advice:

     


    My little dose of wisdom for the day: *Yoda voice* a moment of embarrassment is far better than a lifetime of regret~! ♥
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    Posted 11 Sep 13 - 02:19 AM

    I did? I keep reading it and I still think it's lack of emotions. well, it's up to you guys to judge.

    thanks ^^


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