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#21 SaliLOVESGD

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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:28 PM

    WOW RUKA!!!! This is very good! :panda_hypnotize:


    I want more!
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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:30 PM

    The second is even better than the first...I really like the second poem...Cannot wait for the new poem
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    #23 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:34 PM

    the second one is better than the first one??
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    Posted 06 Jul 12 - 05:07 PM

    Updated. This is my third poem. Enjoy. ^^

    3. Free (Dreams)


    I wanted to live in happiness; with you,
    But I can't believe that you go and left me behind.

    Alone in this big; cruel world,
    I'm acting strong; stand in this world without you.

    I proved to myself that I can survive without you,
    And I won't be infatuated by others.

    I'm tired pretending nothing happened around me,
    Enough of it.

    I must not fear anything anymore and I still dream of you in my life,
    But I can do nothing as you're no longer in this world.

    Goodbye, my dear.
    You're now free from this world,

    May you be safe in afterlife too,
    I will always kept all our memories with me,

    Goodbye for now and forever,
    And I will always miss you.


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    Posted 06 Jul 12 - 05:17 PM

    wow what a really great and nice poem... :panda_girl_funnyface:
    Hope eunni will do even better in the next poem.... ^_^
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    #26 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 06 Jul 12 - 05:48 PM

    thanks Mary. I wrote this long ago and just post here now for others to read. I already wrote 14 English poems and 1 Malay poem.
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    Posted 07 Jul 12 - 11:15 AM

    Updated. This is my third poem. Enjoy. ^^

    3. Free (Dreams)


    I wanted to live in happiness; with you,
    But I can't believe that you go and left me behind.

    Alone in this big; cruel world,
    I'm acting strong; stand in this world without you.

    I proved to myself that I can survive without you,
    And I won't be infatuated by others.

    I'm tired pretending nothing happened around me,
    Enough of it.

    Goodbye, my dear.
    You're now free from this world,

    May you be safe in afterlife too,
    I will always kept all our memories with me,

    Goodbye for now and forever,
    And I will always miss you.


    (ROOKS!)
    Im hoping this isnt real...cos I dont have my specs on...well...my kool specs...sooo hopefully your doing good as of now :)
    Also...how do you come up with all these poems?
    Where does all the inspiration come from?

    BEEPBEEP!
    *Jeebus Is Returning ;)*
    I must not fear anything anymore and I still dream of you in my life,
    But I can do nothing as you're no longer in this world.

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    Posted 08 Jul 12 - 02:55 AM

    Jeeb, of course it isn't real. I don't have someone to die for me. hahaha
    where's your kool specs gone?? I am doing fine. and about the inspirations..

    from my own feelings, anime, random, weather, etc.
    the third one is from anime I watching.

    yay, Jeeb is returning. lol left one phrase behind. haha

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    Posted 08 Jul 12 - 09:38 AM

    Good job sis Love it

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    *by me*


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    Posted 10 Jul 12 - 05:03 PM

    Nice Ruka!!!


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    More?

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    Posted 10 Jul 12 - 05:14 PM

    This one based on the real person.

    4. If you know...


    If you listen deep into my heart,
    You’ll know what I want.
    If you could make me laugh,
    You’ll be the happiest person that I have.
    If you ever make me cry,
    You’ll know that I will never forgive you.
    If you could make me feel the happiness of love,
    You’ll know that I always loving you.


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    Posted 10 Jul 12 - 05:58 PM

    Ok i really like that one Ruka!!


    And I am jealous too because I want to write this well! Keep it up looking forward to the next one already.


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    Posted 11 Jul 12 - 04:22 AM

    I don't know why but the more my poems, the less I feel the excitement in writing it.

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    Posted 11 Jul 12 - 06:08 AM

    This one based on the real person.

    4. If you know...


    If you listen deep into my heart,
    You’ll know what I want.
    If you could make me laugh,
    You’ll be the happiest person that I have.
    If you ever make me cry,
    You’ll know that I will never forgive you.
    If you could make me feel the happiness of love,
    You’ll know that I always loving you.



    *gasp* this one actually made me think for a while! I SWEAR ROOKS! this is O-SOME!
    And hence it was based on a real life experience...hopefully you have been mended or have recovered from it :)
    BEEP BEEP! Good Work and waiting for the next piece to come our way ;)

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    Posted 11 Jul 12 - 06:52 AM

    thanks Jeeby~~ I'm already recovered. don't worry. for now on, DSS Family is my happiness.
    the next one will up soon. I just wrote the 16th poem yesterday and 17th poem just now.

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    Posted 12 Jul 12 - 02:58 PM

    Daebak! Sugoi Poem Ruka Chan Ganbatte ne!!! :icon_attention: :icon_attention:

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    Posted 12 Jul 12 - 03:02 PM

    arigatou lelouch~~ :icon_likethis: :icon_likethis:

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    Posted 12 Jul 12 - 03:41 PM

    Love your poems, ruka. At first I thought I would never post mine on dss coz I think it's too personal lol, and then I see yours and I know I'm not alone loool. Thank you for encouraged me before :P
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    Posted 12 Jul 12 - 04:01 PM

    Love your poems, ruka. At first I thought I would never post mine on dss coz I think it's too personal lol, and then I see yours and I know I'm not alone loool. Thank you for encouraged me before :P

    lol It's nothing. Mine is too much emotional expression. well, as the person who requested a poetry section exist in DSS, I command you to post more of your poems in DSS Blog. haha
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    Posted 14 Jul 12 - 10:35 AM

    Another one is up.

    5. Love

    Love?
    I wonder is this feeling is love?
    The feeling that cannot tell everybody,
    It does suffocate me.

    It’s you, the one in my heart.
    It’s you, who brighten my life.
    It’s you, the one for me.

    It is just me, who feel like that,
    You don’t even looking at me.
    I keep wondering why it can’t be me.

    Why do you can’t understand my signal for you?
    Why do you denying my existence?
    Why do I fall for you?

    I tried to forget you but it just lead to frustration.
    I started to hate myself,
    Because I love you.


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