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#1 goli

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    Posted 25 Jun 12 - 09:36 PM

    Hello DSS friends thanks for reading this topic I hope you like it
    If my poem is not very good forgive me or if you think i have to work on it just tell me icon_pleeease.gif

    L O V E

    I love you..
    I'll love you forever..

    These are the words.
    This is the love you gave me.
    Through words only words...

    You fooled me with them
    you fooled me with your fake love
    you fooled me with your smile
    you fooled me all the time

    I can't believe all you said all you did
    were only a lie.

    The day you told me you love me and will stay by my side
    was the happiest day of my life
    The happiest day of my miserable life

    That night,that day all are memory s now..
    memory s which make me cry~~cry alone in my heart

    But the day, the day you told me you don't love me
    The day you ended your love for me
    Was like a nightmare
    A scary nightmare

    I wish
    I wish you feel my love again
    I wish

    Comeback to me,comeback for me

    I'll be right here waiting for you
    I'll be waiting for you forever
    ~
    ~
    ~
    Remembering the nights you stayed up for me
    The days you stayed by my side till the very end
    Remembering them make me feel miserable
    They make my heart ache

    So comeback to me,comeback for me my love..

    My love for you will never disappear, will never be forgotten
    So I'll wait, I'll wait till the very end...

    Comeback to me..



    here are the links for updates:
    2.One more time
    3.To love is to place our happiness in the happines of another
    4.What shall I do?
    5.We are one
    6.Our last memory
    7.The fact
    8.Around the world
    9.Sallowness in my heart
    10.The Mistake I made
    11.----------
    12. Love is like a Strawberry
    13. Cold Smile
    14. Our Thorn Hearts

    15. The Fall

    16. The Sun and The Moon


    Edited by goli, 19 Apr 13 - 10:31 AM.
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    Posted 25 Jun 12 - 09:37 PM

    COOL!! :icon_girlcongrats:
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    Posted 26 Jun 12 - 03:56 AM

    Filled with emotions. :thumbs-up^ :icon_girlcongrats:
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    Posted 26 Jun 12 - 06:06 AM

    :'[

    [sniffles] Goli this....we like...so much u made Larna tears fall like the leaves in autumn
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    MUCH APPRECIATED BY:

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    Posted 26 Jun 12 - 06:25 AM

    thumb up :panda_loveit:

    keep up a good work ^_^

    i like it
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    Posted 26 Jun 12 - 06:42 AM

    post more goli~ can't wait to read more.
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    Posted 26 Jun 12 - 08:31 AM

    For ever in love Goli :icon_fascinate: keep working hard in poems :D :icon_whistling: :icon_kudos: :panda_clap:


    'made me remeber my highschool so called poetry :lol: '

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    Posted 26 Jun 12 - 12:32 PM

    Thanks all~~~ :icon_KARAdance:
    I Still have to work on my poems
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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 01:45 AM

    Awwww, that was so sad! Is this based on real life too, goli?
    The poem is very well-written, I actually really like repetition as a poetic device!! :)
    Sounds almost like a song! ♥
    Hehe, you and Ruka-chan are making me feel like writing poetry again too! :P
    Good work, goli dear. Keep writing! :)
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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 10:52 AM

    Yup it's based on real life~~ :icon_nooneelse:
    I'm glad you like it :panda_cookie:

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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 02:04 PM

    @Mona write a poem again~!!! I want to read it too!!

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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:33 PM

    this one is not very good~~~ sorry

    ONE MORE TIME

    Once again sing along with me
    sing along with my heart beat
    once again listen to me

    Listen to my heart
    Listen to me
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    ~
    Your smile, your eyes
    all are cold now
    they don't make me feel your love any more

    your words, your feelings
    I won't listen
    I won't feel them any more

    NO No
    not again

    You don't listen to my heart
    you never did you never will

    SO I won't feel your love anymore
    I'll let your love slid form my heart

    I'll forget you and the moments we had together
    The sweet moments we spent with each other
    I'll forget them all

    You made rainy nights so sad for me
    You made me feel like a lonely star up in the sky

    As rain drops droped from the sky
    my tear started to flow
    I missed you I missed you everyday

    But you never listened to me
    You never heard my heart beats

    On those scary days
    I needed you by my side
    I needed your smile

    But you never came
    You never showed up

    My love for you was so strong
    My tears for you were real

    And all you gave me was a cold smile
    A cold smile that made me believe myself

    Your smile was like a gift to me

    But after that day I won't
    I won't love you anymore

    You never listened to my heart
    You never Showed your Love probebly

    No No
    NOT again

    I won't forgive you
    I will never forgive you
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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:37 PM

    I love it goli.. it's more like lyric and I like that..
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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:39 PM

    I love it but it sound like a song lyrics...i think it a great poem ^_^
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    Posted 29 Jun 12 - 04:40 PM

    I agree with Ruka! Very good keep it up!!

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    Posted 14 Jul 12 - 08:24 PM

    HI all how are you??
    OK so this one is not a poem actually it is sth like text!!^^
    so tell me what you think thnxx

    To love is to place our happiness in the happines of another
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    Love story s are often about 2 people who love each other so much but they can never be together,all they have is a feeling called LOVE. They make each other suffer and at the end...
    To tell the truth I really don't know what love is about?! The only thing i know is that love can make our past disappear and let us smile, smile to the world ahead us...

    I loved someone with my heart although i knew he will never love me but still...
    I started to forget about him and I decided to wait, wait for someone to make me happy

    And I found someone, a person who had so much pain but he always smiled to the world and believed there is always a happiness to seek.

    He made me believe love and showed me how i should Love! After the moments i spent with him I thought, I thought maybe I can make him forget about past and live a cheerful life.
    But I shall never tell him my feelings :(

    So I will be quiet and won't say a word I will wait for the right moment...

    I will stay by your side, I will love you and trust you.
    I wish I could help you

    ^^
    (MR Z I love you)
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    Posted 14 Jul 12 - 11:49 PM

    you need to start writing some song lyrics

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    Posted 15 Jul 12 - 02:27 AM

    yeah, it's not like a poem but your feeling can be seen there.
    anyway, good job. so I know your answer now.
    I'll reply again when home.

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    Posted 15 Jul 12 - 12:08 PM

    Gol goli doset daram ghade ye donya ^_^

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    Posted 15 Jul 12 - 03:18 PM

    merci biane jooon ^^

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