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#21 SaliLOVESGD

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    Posted 16 Jul 12 - 04:59 PM

    GOLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!! Very expressive, and good!


    Start writing poems!


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    Posted 17 Jul 12 - 08:25 PM

    Nice writing goli! I am impressed! ^^

    I agree with the rest ! You should think about writing lyrics for songs too! With these much emotions portrayed where you're able to let in same emotions to your readers, you're talented in that. Keep it up.

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    Posted 18 Jul 12 - 07:22 AM

    Lyrics! Lyrics! Lyrics! Can't wait to read your next lyrics.
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    Posted 18 Jul 12 - 07:38 AM

    OMG thnx for your nice comments :icon_whistling: ^^ I will try to write some ^^
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    Posted 19 Jul 12 - 09:24 PM

    Since MR Z is Not available and MR Loser is gone!! My mind is completely blocked and I have no idea what to write about!! MY MIND IS BLOCKED!
    Friends help!!
    I have some poems but they are weird! And I'm writing some lyrics too but they are weird as well! :icon_study:
    RUKA SIS give me a clue!!
    anyone?? :icon_no_no:
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    Posted 19 Jul 12 - 10:01 PM

    woah Goli you're so talented I've fallen in love with all of theme especially with the second poem i could've heard the background music playing along with it :panda_loveit: :icon_KARAdance: :icon_fascinate:

    keep them going dear :icon_pleeease:
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    Posted 20 Jul 12 - 09:19 AM

    Thnx for your nice comment ^^ :icon_KARAdance: :panda_girl_dance: :icon_girlcongrats:
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    Posted 20 Jul 12 - 07:10 PM

    Oh sorry if it's not very good!! I don't know what to say so all I can think about right now is this:

    What Shall I Do?



    On that lonely island
    On that high mountain

    Down in the valley
    Down, deep inside of my heart
    Deep inside of me

    You're there
    You're there
    You are always there!!

    But let's move on. Let's move on with our lives

    I will be here....Always

    There won't be any sad memory s, there won't be any sadness.
    I'll fall in love ,I'll try to love, I'll try to hate
    I'll keep moving till the end

    That's right
    I love you
    That's my heart beat
    That's right

    I'll love I'll hate! That's life That's my life
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    Walk along the beach
    listen to that sound
    listen to my heart

    Feel the wind
    feel my love

    Sing along with me
    Sing along with my heart

    ~I Love you I love you~ LOVE~

    But now...

    On that lonely island
    there were only one thing that made me happy
    There were only one person in my mind
    That person were you
    You were there with me

    On that cold mountain
    I felt warm because i felt your warm hands on mine
    I smiled because I saw you smiling at me

    Down in the valley
    You were like a ...

    I'll try to love I'll try to hate
    So let's move on, let's move on to the next chapter shall we?

    My next step will be so lonely My next step forward will be without you
    I promised I'll love you
    You promised You'll love me
    But now...

    I will keep moving I'll keep moving till the end
    I'll love I'll hate

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    Posted 21 Jul 12 - 06:00 AM

    'On that lonely island
    On that high mountain

    Down in the valley ...' My lovely writer keep doing this and you will grow into a great writer who will express more deeply her feelings ^_^ .

    Bearhugsss.

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    Posted 21 Jul 12 - 08:40 AM

    Thnx sis ^^ :icon_girlcongrats:
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    Posted 21 Jul 12 - 09:02 AM

    it's okay goli. keep posting. ^^
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    Posted 21 Jul 12 - 10:08 AM

    I wish I'm as talented as you are on writing poems. well I have reasons why I'm not allowed to right a poem even if I wanted too.
    here are they:

    1. I think I have no heart. lmao
    2. I don't believe in inspiration. it bores me even the thought of it. :/
    3. I'm a bad writer, chances are my writing will be like 80% grammatically incorrect. haha
    4. my brain automatically locks after 2 mins of thinking so hard..

    so meh.. my destiny is to become the reader all my life. Posted Image


    P.S. I love your poem, they are so moving... <3


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    Posted 21 Jul 12 - 10:17 AM

    Oh thnx for you comments
    @MSk lol being a reader is a good thing too ^^ but if you really want to write sth you have to try!! MY worst subj in my mother tongue is poetry and writing!! I can't even read one!! but when I found my heart I started to write so if you really want you can do it!!
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    Posted 22 Jul 12 - 08:04 AM

    On that cold mountain
    I felt warm because i felt your warm hands on mine
    I smiled because I saw you smiling at me


    This to me really made me smile :)
    Actually its my favourite part of the poem! Goli...you can achieve heaps more If you keep expressing your feelings...whether it may be indirect or direct!



    Be colourful in poetry...and be daring!

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    Posted 22 Jul 12 - 09:00 AM

    My lovely Gol Goli, you did well and P.S you just deserve to be loved and love other so no hating and life will be more beautiful just by loving eachother even others say they don't love you ^_^
    Keep on writing poems and :icon_girlcongrats:

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    Posted 22 Jul 12 - 08:14 PM

    Jeeb that's really nice of you ^^ thnx for smiling :icon_amazed: HI5 jeeb
    And biane sis thnx for you beautiful comment you are my eunni and I listen to everything you tell me ^^
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    Posted 25 Jul 12 - 08:16 PM

    We are ONE

    Remember the day we met each other!
    Remember that wonderful day
    And remember not to forget that day

    The day I joined here
    The decision I made
    I will never regret it
    None of us will regret it
    WE NEVER WILL

    I met many ppl
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    They laughed and made me laugh
    We made each other’s sadness disappear
    And we made lots of happy memories together

    You made my life enjoyable
    I will Never forget about You
    You made a family for me
    A wonderful family which you can never find elsewhere

    WE ARE ALWAYS TOGETHERE
    PROTECTING EACHOTHER

    WE are one
    We are a family



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    For this wonderful and enjoyable moments that you brought me!


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    Posted 25 Jul 12 - 08:32 PM

    oh goli~~!! I'm so loving this poem!! Your greatest poem!!! ^^ Me never forget you and others. We need each other. My heart melt~! :icon_kiss:
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    Posted 25 Jul 12 - 09:50 PM

    I still Do remember our first meeting and I like your poem Gol :icon_KARAdance:
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    Posted 25 Jul 12 - 11:29 PM

    Posted Image luv your poem goli ^_^
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