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#1 Jeebus

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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 08:15 AM

    Hahaha since peeps are posting up poems...

    Jeebus too wants to join in on the fun Posted Image
    Hopefully we can keep up with the Greats:

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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 08:47 AM

    Lol, where's your poem? :P
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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 02:16 PM

    Jeeby gonna write poem too~!!! Woohoooo can't wait for your poem Jeeby..
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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 05:45 PM

    jeeebyyy great can't even wait!!
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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 06:08 PM

    YOU SAVED ME:


    You Saved this weary soul of mine!
    It was through you
    I was made anew
    And for you will never know
    How much I am to owe


    On that very night
    Without a single sight
    You came along
    To feel you belong
    And chose me as a starter
    From there I became your partner


    We exchanged many stories
    both of laughs and agonies
    No rock was left unturned
    All of our barriers burned
    There we were in the open


    We would converse for hours
    With topics as tall as towers!
    Endless questions piled up
    Our answers lengthy...
    Brought down those towers with a chop
    Making us converse more freely...


    You made me feel secure
    It was your honesty that would ensure
    That our trust would be solid
    Neither never to be disappointed
    But to only be accredited


    With your help and patience
    I spoke my inner conscience
    I expressed all of my grievances
    Until you praised with joyfulness
    For my sincerity and truthfulness
    For you would be the first
    And hopefully the last


    Never have I had come across
    Someone with a heart like yours
    For you have saved me
    And now this soul is free
    Free as the sapphire sea


    You Saved this weary soul of mine!
    It was through you
    I was made anew
    And for you will never know
    How much I am to owe


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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 06:34 PM

    Jeeby......JEEBY.........JEEEEEEEEEBBYY!!!
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    GREAT JOB make sure to tell me when you have updated!!
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    Posted 05 Aug 12 - 09:50 PM

    Oh! We have another poem's writer in here , Nice .. I Like it , Its really good .. Keep going ^^ :icon_girlcongrats:
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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 12:05 AM

    Jeeby... I love it and you know what, you can make a song from this poem!!!! I'm sure it will be good. ^^
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    You Saved this weary soul of mine!
    It was through you
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    How much I am to owe


    I love this phrase so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job.. keep it coming up okay?? this is my gift for you.
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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 03:37 AM

    so nice ^_^
    touch my heart ^_^
    keep it up ^_^
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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 04:14 AM

    Nice, nice, very nice! :)
    Good work Jeebus!

    Not based on real life though, is it? ;)
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    P.S. By first poem, you don't mean your first poem EVER, do you? :o
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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 04:52 AM

    :icon_yippie:

    Jhanks Everypeeps! Hahaha and yes its our FIRST poem EVER written!
    And trust me...we had to use alot of brainpower for it O___O as of now...our brain will be recovering!

    And Mon...hehehe its based on real-life too
    But thats as far as I can go to tell you peeps :icon_no_no: (kinda shy to tell how this poem came about)

    And now that we have read it...ugh...its so NOOBISH/CHILDLIKE/UNPREPARED lolololololol
    But oh well...hopefully I can write more poems and learn from everyone :)
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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 05:08 AM

    recover your brains quickly, Jeeby.. we all will wait for your next poem..
    and tell me in pvt how the poem came about..... okay?? please????

    since I did tell you how my poem came... I command Jeeby tell me too. :icon_torturing:
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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 05:36 PM

    MIRACULOUS




    Miraculous!
    That's what you are
    It describes you best by far
    You are all one would want
    To call their own confidant

    It just makes me coo-coo
    Just thinking of you

    Even seeing your name
    The result is the same
    With such beauty
    One would feel guilty
    To not have approached you

    And to even bid you farewell
    Makes one eyes swell
    Its as if the sun's warmth
    disappeared down south
    Where I must wait for your return

    Upon waiting I am restless
    There I am left motionless

    But when you return to me
    Id feel as if it was an eternity
    My happiness would overflow
    And once more my life would glow
    This is something you wont know

    To me you are the reason
    For this new feeling
    And I'm thankful for this season
    For its blessed our meeting
    I know deep down and throughout
    I know I would've missed out

    For no other can be compared
    Not even to be suggested
    Its all that could be stated

    to me...

    You are Miraculous!


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    Posted 06 Aug 12 - 06:59 PM

    I think our jeebus just reaveled the bunny :P
    I am impresed with your poems :icon_graduate:.I really like them :icon_peace: promise to read them more closely when I am not this tirred :blush:
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    Posted 07 Aug 12 - 02:52 AM

    I think our jeebus just reaveled the bunny :P
    I am impresed with your poems :icon_graduate:.I really like them :icon_peace: promise to read them more closely when I am not this tirred :blush:


    :panda_cheeky_haha:
    Hhahaha take your time ASI :)

    Being lengthy and wordy
    You might need some brain-power to read it :P

    REST WELL!!! :icon_whistling:

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    Posted 07 Aug 12 - 06:41 AM

    nice ^_^
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    Posted 07 Aug 12 - 07:08 AM

    nice one Jeeby~!!! ^^ I love it.. wow, you wrote another poem within a day~ *clap clap*
    will waiting for more. maybe I should update mine too. it seems lonely over there. haha

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    Posted 07 Aug 12 - 07:19 AM

    :icon_yippie: Jhanks Everypeeps! Hahaha and yes its our FIRST poem EVER written!And trust me...we had to use alot of brainpower for it O___O as of now...our brain will be recovering!And Mon...hehehe its based on real-life tooBut thats as far as I can go to tell you peeps :icon_no_no: (kinda shy to tell how this poem came about)And now that we have read it...ugh...its so NOOBISH/CHILDLIKE/UNPREPARED lololololololBut oh well...hopefully I can write more poems and learn from everyone :)Oh and to Rooks, Goli, Bibi, and Mon: :icon_peace: (Jhank You Very Much for the support)Much Appreciated,Jeebus/Larna/Jiffany/Lemon/Lala

    Do tell! xD

    It just makes me coo-coo
    Just thinking of you

    Hahaha, this part made me laugh so hard!

    Nice poem Jeebus! ^^ Now, I really want to know who who who WHO? :P
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    Posted 07 Aug 12 - 08:33 AM

    JEEBy JEEBY JEEEEEEBY
    I Will show you how i felt after readfing this parts:

    And to even bid you farewell
    Makes one eyes swell
    Its as if the sun's warmth
    disappeared down south
    Where I must wait for your return

    Upon waiting I am restless
    There I am left motionless

    But when you return to me
    Id feel as if it was an eternity
    My happiness would overflow
    And once more my life would glow
    This is something you wont know

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    Good job! :panda_yo:
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    Posted 08 Aug 12 - 02:30 PM

    Ok ok ok everyone...

    Reason why I wrote those poems was first:

    You Saved Me: was to thank her for letting me express myself fully...and made me feel lighter than before...even personal stuff was spilt but it felt right to do so :)


    Miraculous:
    Is how Id describe this person in one word! She just makes our lives just a little bit brighter :) Never wanna let her go too :(
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