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#21 ♔❤aram❤♔

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    Posted 17 Sep 12 - 12:24 PM

    Your poem was great mona. It was a little different.

    We are waiting for the next one!!!

    I won't run out of poems. 4 people are updating their poems.

    Keep up ur great work.
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    Posted 18 Sep 12 - 11:36 AM

    Your poem was great mona. It was a little different.

    We are waiting for the next one!!!

    I won't run out of poems. 4 people are updating their poems.

    Keep up ur great work.


    Aww, thanks for stopping by Aram! ♥

    It's finally time to upload another one lol (yes I'm too lazy to write often)! :P
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    Posted 18 Sep 12 - 11:57 AM

    This was written for the best friend I lost about 8 years ago. We haven't spoken at all for about 3-4 years now. Sometimes, I hear a bit about how he's doing; seems like he's coaching basketball and dancing and directing musicals and well on his way to a successful career at the same time - he's as socially and academically brilliant now as he was in highschool. Watching from the sidelines, I'm silently proud of all his achievements. I hope he continues to shine. He wrote me a letter all those years ago, and I guess this poem sums up everything I wanted to say to him in response, but couldn't. Gambatte!


    If we ever meet again

    If we ever meet again,
    There are some things I'd like to say,
    Like thank you, please, and I'm sorry
    That things turned out this way.

    Thank you for making me laugh 'til I cried,
    Thank you for relenting when we argue.
    Thank you for giving me freedom to choose,
    Knowing my choice might not be you.

    Please follow all your hopes and dreams,
    Please smile everyday and be happy,
    Please leave behind all the heartache,
    And erase me from your memory.

    I'm sorry my answer wasn't what you wanted,
    I'm sorry to be the cause of your tears.
    I'm sorry I couldn't return your feelings,
    And for avoiding you all these years.

    I wanted to go back to the way things were,
    But I couldn't ask you to pretend,
    That your confession was just a joke,
    And that you were still my best friend.

    It would be too cruel and too selfish,
    Something that I just couldn't do.
    So, with a heavy heart, I let you go,
    Knowing it was best for you.

    I never once told you all these years,
    How much I've missed your company.
    I was distant and cold and I'm sorry,
    But I had to make you forget me.

    I can't remember the last time we spoke,
    But if you ever chance upon this letter;
    Know that my sincerest hope and wish
    Is that you've found someone better.

    They say that time can heal everything,
    All the sadness and the pain,
    So I pray you'll smile at me like a stranger
    If we ever meet again.
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    Posted 18 Sep 12 - 12:17 PM

    Mona!!! I love it!!! It just touch my heart!!! <3<3
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    Posted 18 Sep 12 - 12:36 PM

    Mona!!! I love it!!! It just touch my heart!!! <3<3


    Awww thanks Hanna! :)

    He's one of three best friends I have lost (SIGH), and if I have to keep writing poems, I'm sure you'll hear the sad tales of the other two as well! :P
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    Posted 19 Sep 12 - 04:28 AM

    do more!! I want to read the sad story of other two as well!!!
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    Posted 19 Sep 12 - 01:11 PM

    do more!! I want to read the sad story of other two as well!!!


    Haha!!! At this rate, I will be following in your footsteps as a tragic poet!! :P Nah, my style is more bittersweet I think lol! :lol:

    But yes, I'm currently working on one of the other two stories, so I'm sure you'll see it soon enough! :)
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    Posted 19 Sep 12 - 03:13 PM

    haha yay~!! don't follow my footsteps!! do you own style. My theme is only mine.. haha
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    Posted 20 Sep 12 - 04:32 AM

    This sounds interesting ! Tell us more about the other two friends MON ! :) Im keen to know whats their low-down !
    Oh and yes...Im very JELLY of your writing style...*(hmmmph)* :P
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    Posted 11 Mar 13 - 03:08 AM

    This poem was written a while ago for someone who is probably no longer alive.

    Retribution

    Hate burns like a scalding furnace,
    To forgive and forget is rare.
    Retribution is swift, fear is lethal,
    A life for a life seems fair.

    Vengeance is like a dark grey cloud,
    Looming just overhead.
    Thirsty for blood and ready to pounce,
    Its path is stained deep red.

    In your grim world of black and white,
    You thrive on bleak misery.
    Compassion is weak, pity is pathetic,
    Kindness leads to agony.

    You think you control the hearts of men,
    Through brutality and fear.
    You seek obedience by inciting pain,
    But none of that is sincere.

    Power through violence doesn't last,
    So, be prepared for the fall.
    When the sword of justice finally strikes,
    No-one will grieve for you at all.

    Be vigilant of everything around you,
    Be wary of those you keep near.
    No murderer commands true loyalty,
    No real trust derives from fear.

    Every action has a consequence,
    Every tear has a cause.
    No crime will go unpunished,
    No injustice goes unseen.

    Through the ashes, I have risen,
    Shaken off the fog of night.
    The ordeal has made me stronger,
    Taught me to walk in the light.

    Strength is the courage to stand again,
    When the road's too dark to see.
    Strength is the will to leave behind,
    The destructive path most easy.

    I have forgiven, but I'll never forget,
    What you took away from me.
    Watch your back and mend your ways,
    And pray you never meet me.


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    Posted 11 Mar 13 - 06:42 AM

    ermmm.. I don't know what it mean but sound like your anger and hatred still there. haha xD

    summary please??
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    Posted 11 Mar 13 - 11:51 AM

    Haha, I don't think anger and sense of injustice can ever really just "go away" - some semblance of it will always remain and rise to the surface when a memory or event brings you back to a moment of devastation.

    You think you've forgotten, but something will act as a catalyst to bring the memory back to haunt you. At that moment, you realise that although time has worn away the pain and sowed the seed of forgiveness, you can never truly forget.

    That's how I feel when I see murder stories in the news. Every article is a knife turning in an old wound.

    I think people have different ways of coping with trauma; personally, I never block it out. Rather, I try to remember it. The memory makes me stronger, and reminds me that I'm still alive. It reminds me that I've lived through massacres and bombings and murders, so what can't I face? :)
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    Posted 30 Jul 13 - 02:04 AM

    It's been a while since I posted anything here haha~!
    Because the last one was so dark, I thought I'd do a lighthearted one this time~! ;)


    Why?

    Brown eyes like liquid chocolate,
    Soft and warm and sweet.
    Mesmerising and mysterious,
    My heart skips a beat.
    Why can't I look away?
     

    A smile more dazzling than diamonds,
    Pure and sweet and true.
    Shining with open sincerity,
    All I can see is you.
    Why can't I breathe?
     

    Voice like sunshine and honey,
    Music to my ears.
    Recipe for my happiness,
    Antidote to my fears.
    Why can't I speak?
     

    I strain to catch the sound of your voice,
    Across the crowded room.
    I treasure every smile, every laugh, every glance,
    Everyday is over too soon.
     

    You smile, I smile, I can't help myself,
    You frown, I frown too.
    I wonder what you're thinking about,
    All I think about is you.
     

    Why does my heart beat fast when you're near?
    Why can't I look you in the eye?
    Why don't my words flow like they should?
    Who can tell me why?

     


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    Posted 30 Jul 13 - 02:54 AM

    Because you're in love. haha XD Mona, it's really sweet~~ love it!


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    Posted 30 Jul 13 - 05:50 AM

    Haha, thanks Hanna~! ♥
    This poem is meant to capture the feeling of first love~! ;)
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    Posted 30 Jul 13 - 10:24 AM

    omg! so sweet! sis I just remembered my first love >.> haha. lol but now I have this feeling for hyun joong oppa lol JK JK


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    Posted 30 Jul 13 - 11:31 AM

    Hahaha~! xD

    Imagine if Hyun Joong-ssi walked into a room ~ no-one would be composing poetry LOL, we'd all be staring with our mouths open~! xD


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    Posted 30 Jul 13 - 11:59 AM

    haha! so true~ if only he walked into the room...


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