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#1 takachou

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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 11:30 AM

    here is my first one,

    views reflected in this doesn't necessarily reflects my views

    "...lost in her eyes,
    i saw the story of two people
    who's fate was to be together but
    as a matter of bad luck, unfortunate life happenings,
    two souls twisted apart
    linked by the heavy chains of love,
    bonded a heavenly decree

    these too souls in suffering will not part from each other


    living in the dark abyss of profound unrequited love
    her lips as pure as heavens
    made me fly like icarus toward the sun
    only to get burn
    and crash...
    this was just a dream
    a small dream on a dreamy day..."
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    #2 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 11:37 AM

    oh, I'm the first one.thanks for informed me first.
    wow taka~ I love your poem!! does it have deep meaning? coz the poem really feel like it does have a deep meaning.
    love this lines.

    two souls twisted apart
    linked by they heavy chains of love,
    bonded a heavenly decree

    write more. I want more! lol
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    #3 takachou

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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 11:41 AM

    it does have a meaning ^^
    lol actually its the first one i write like in 4 years
    i'll do more later ^^
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    #4 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 11:46 AM

    oh... yeah, I'm right in guessing. I wonder if I know the meaning.. hehe
    It is good taka ^^
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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 12:20 PM

    moar moar
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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 06:45 PM

    And i was just asking in your Intro to post your poems :D
    It's really deep and full of figures of speech .

    made me fly like icarus toward the sun
    only to get burn
    and crash...


    this just so smart !!! comparison with an icarius ,great :D
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    #7 takachou

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    Posted 27 Aug 12 - 06:55 PM

    lol actually am more like dr genkil n mr hyde when it come to writing looks like i got double personality, lol i can use words i don't even know about it before lol
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    #8 takachou

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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 12:35 PM

    In this day full of rain
    covered by mighty thunderous cloud
    lifted by this holy motto:
    Omnia vincit Amor
    "love conquers all"
    i find marching forward
    against the odd
    in a David v/s Goliath fight
    accompanied by the Rhythm
    of the drops of rain on the pavement
    reminding me of my fate
    -=a river of tears must i cry=-
    faith in love faith in destiny
    faith in the woman i'm seeking
    can the miracle of love happen?
    or will i taste the water of disillusion
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    #9 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 12:42 PM

    wow~!! I love it!!! :icon_amazed: and I saw it. lol
    the ending is good too ^^ love the line

    can the miracle of love happen?


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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 12:44 PM

    Chou ^^


    And u say u never experienced some of this feelings ? how could they come out so good ,really ?
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    #11 takachou

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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 02:26 PM

    Chou ^^


    And u say u never experienced some of this feelings ? how could they come out so good ,really ?

    lol this one maybe ^^ dreamed then wrote about it
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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 02:32 PM

    wow~!! I love it!!! :icon_amazed: and I saw it. lol
    the ending is good too ^^ love the line

    thanks ruka ^^ lol but that stays btw us ^^
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    #13 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 02:57 PM

    thanks ruka ^^ lol but that stays btw us ^^

    haha I know. I will be. ^^
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    Posted 28 Aug 12 - 04:25 PM

    thanks ruka ^^
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    #15 takachou

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    Posted 30 Aug 12 - 02:25 PM

    Prelude:
    Samohaeyo (dearest love)
    my one and only
    i once was dead but now i live,
    thank you,

    i once met an Arabic princess,
    from a golden land in a far, far, far, away land

    precious among the stars
    glamorous between diamond
    wonders between the wonders
    "if you were to find a woman,
    that light your world,
    you were to never lived the side"
    this meeting long foreshadowed by
    and old man coming from another time.
    thinking about this words
    i kept falling for her
    Urin cheonsaengyeonbuniya( we are a match made in heaven)
    seeing her lovely hair lit by the moonlight
    the spell of love was cast on me,
    your perfume which the wind carried like burnt encent
    kept pulling me towards her
    if only if could draw her my feeling
    if only she would look at me

    **end of part one***
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    #16 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 30 Aug 12 - 02:28 PM

    I love this poem~!!! I'm waiting for part 2!! It is lovely. ^^
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    Posted 30 Aug 12 - 02:58 PM

    i love this poem taka,it's fab, keep them coming lovely...when will you post part 2! don't make me wait for so long okay,i'm kind of impatient, hehehe
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    Posted 01 Sep 12 - 12:06 PM

    wow, OPPA! I'm love your works. More~
    where's the next one? :D
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    Posted 02 Sep 12 - 03:05 AM

    thanks minay,
    Thanks my pretty sis
    Will upload it, when I get valid internet connection,
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    Posted 03 Sep 12 - 05:35 PM

    I can't wait for more!! So nice!!

    Urin cheonsaengyeonbuniya( we are a match made in heaven)
    seeing her lovely hair lit by the moonlight
    the spell of love was cast on me,
    your perfume which the wind carried like burnt encent
    kept pulling me towards her
    if only if could draw her my feeling
    if only she would look at me


    :D :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
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