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#21 takachou

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    Posted 03 Sep 12 - 06:24 PM

    thanks goli ^^
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    Posted 04 Sep 12 - 09:51 PM

    Chou ^^


    Remember my foolish poetry the ones I could not find it :lol: ?
    well since i visited my grandparents I found my precious notebook :lol: ,precious because it has letters ,songs and many things ^_^ I <3
    Anyway here is one silly so called poetry :lol: made in november 2002


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    You stole my heart

    You take my breath

    You broke my heart

    You stole my laugh



    You never see me

    You never give me

    You're precious heart

    You're never hurt !


    You are a game

    A dangerous one

    You're always happy

    You never cry !


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    #23 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 05 Sep 12 - 06:57 AM

    Asi chan!!! I love it!!!
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    #24 takachou

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    Posted 05 Sep 12 - 07:25 AM

    asi ^^ great work
    btw whats with silly poetry thing i find nothing silly
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    #25  Asiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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    Posted 08 Sep 12 - 11:21 AM

    Asi chan!!! I love it!!!

    Thank you Ruka chan :wub: but as I said it's really silly :lol:
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    Posted 08 Sep 12 - 11:22 AM

    asi ^^ great work
    btw whats with silly poetry thing i find nothing silly


    Chou ^^ you are sweet but I still belive it's sily :lol: :lol:
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    #27 Yunan Louvenslash

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    Posted 08 Sep 12 - 11:31 AM

    Thank you Ruka chan :wub: but as I said it's really silly :lol:

    no.. it's not silly. seriously!!
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    Posted 08 Sep 12 - 04:05 PM

    Woah..nice poem taka..
    Somehow I'm someone who loves and write poem too..
    Love it..it seems like you are the persona itself..
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    Posted 11 Sep 12 - 07:50 PM

    untitled 1

    Why in this one and only world
    why with my one and heart heart
    feeling crushed by the ocean
    burnt from the inside with unrequited love
    shattered to pieces
    to the law of one sided love i shall forever abide
    coz lonely i was born lonely i shall die
    Finding my way through the never ending maze
    of live neverendind relationships
    if only i had a lighthouse to light my path
    to warn me off troubled zones
    so that i won't anchor in here
    the remains of my once invisible life
    better into i star to turn myself
    so i could just be the same for millions of light years
    before somebody might look up
    and remembers how deep i used to love her
    i might understand how the fallen angels to feel
    coz am fallen lover too fighting on the wrong side of live
    when i should know, no to easily fall in

    love
    birth of all pains
    end of all suffering
    wandering unto a never ending oceans of tears
    washed by the drops of love
    so be the story of one who's taken
    into the web of an unrequited love
    no where too hide even in my deepest nightmares
    no way to express my love
    not even finding in those words
    a way to offer salvation to my soul
    ​forever it should be know about my story
    like words engrave into the stones
    so that my heart may resist eternity
    even if it means loving you forever


    -end-


    i'll like to specially dedicate this to my lovely sis ruka who always read my poems ^^ and always listen to me <3


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    #30 takachou

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    Posted 11 Sep 12 - 08:07 PM

    Woah..nice poem taka..
    Somehow I'm someone who loves and write poem too..
    Love it..it seems like you are the persona itself..


    thank you ^^
    yes its only seems that i am ^^
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    Posted 11 Sep 12 - 08:09 PM

    WOW!! SO nice!! Taka oppa you are really good!! Fighting!! I can't wait for your next poem!
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    Posted 11 Sep 12 - 08:14 PM

    untitled 1

    Why in this one and only world
    why with my one and heart heart
    feeling crushed by the ocean
    burnt from the inside with unrequited love
    shattered to pieces
    to the law of one sided love i shall forever abide
    coz lonely i was born lonely i shall die
    Finding my way through the never ending maze
    of live neverendind relationships
    if only i had a lighthouse to light my path
    to warn me of troubled zone
    so that i won't anchor in here
    the remains of my once invisible life
    better into i star to turn myself
    so i could just be the same for millions of light years
    before somebody might look up
    and remembers how deep i used to love her
    i might understand how the fallen angels to feel
    coz am fallen lover too fighting on the wrong side of live
    when i should know, no to easily fall in

    love
    birth of all pains
    ends of all suffering
    wandering unto a never ending oceans of tears
    washed by the drops of love
    so be the story of one who is who's taken
    into the web of a unrequited love
    no where too hide even in my deepest nightmares
    no way to express my love
    not even finding in those words
    a way to offer salvation to my soul
    ​forever it should be know about my story
    like words engrave into stone
    so that my heart my resist eternity
    even if it means loving you forever


    -end-


    i'll like to specially dedicate this to my lovely sis ruka who always read my poems ^^


    Very good taka!! Love it! Keep up the good work!

    :rolleyes:
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    Posted 12 Sep 12 - 04:53 AM

    Cool story
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    Posted 12 Sep 12 - 05:17 AM

    Here I am reading this Awesoome poem !
    I really like the way you compared your feelings and made it felt the strongs feelings from deep inside the soul and heart !
    Proud of you Chou ^_^

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    Posted 12 Sep 12 - 12:39 PM

    WOW!! SO nice!! Taka oppa you are really good!! Fighting!! I can't wait for your next poem!

    Thank you Goli ^^ lol why is everybody telling me oppa now lol ^^
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    Posted 12 Sep 12 - 12:42 PM

    Cool story

    J ur right its just story, ^^ thanks J
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    Posted 12 Sep 12 - 12:49 PM

    Here I am reading this Awesoome poem !
    I really like the way you compared your feelings and made it felt the strongs feelings from deep inside the soul and heart !
    Proud of you Chou ^_^

    :icon_likethis:

    thank you ^^
    lol not sure if that's my feeling lol and that am involved in it
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    Posted 12 Sep 12 - 12:55 PM

    @sali thanks ^^
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    Posted 13 Sep 12 - 02:18 AM

    I can read it now. raining yesterday night and can't connect my internet.

    oh taka nii, I understand it. take care and I'm here for you. I can barely read the appreciation (need to enlarge it) but thanks ^^ overall, I love your poems!! keep writing.
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    Posted 13 Sep 12 - 04:51 AM

    I can read it now. raining yesterday night and can't connect my internet.

    oh taka nii, I understand it. take care and I'm here for you. I can barely read the appreciation (need to enlarge it) but thanks ^^ overall, I love your poems!! keep writing.


    it was only one night ^^ but i missed u a lot ^^
    lol appreciation enlarged ;) ^^
    thank you ^^ and don't start reading my mind lol
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