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Poetry from my youth :)


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#1 Subterfuge

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    Posted 25 Feb 14 - 03:25 AM

    The following is a poem I wrote when I was 11 . I wrote it to get out of trouble after I lost one of my (very expensive, according to my mama) school shoes. I always wrote to get myself out of trouble lol it it worked 95% of the time. OK , just remember I was only 11 at the time, lol.

     

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    My Shoe

     

    Oh where is my shoe, Oh where can it be?

    I've looked all over, I've even looked on me.

    I've looked on the roof and I've looked on the ground.

    Alas, my poor shoe was no where to be found.

     

    Now tell me, its hard to stay mad after such beautiful writing as that, am I right. lol :P


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    Posted 25 Feb 14 - 06:55 AM

    too cute and too much aware of mother's weakness ;)


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    Posted 26 Feb 14 - 09:52 AM

    hahaha...what a funny and cute poem! ;)


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    Posted 01 Mar 14 - 09:40 PM

    Here is another poem I wrote one summer when I was 12 on the way back from vacation. We had only been in the car for about ten minutes when I asked my dad if we could stop by the store and get me a coke. His response was "We just started, you can wait until we stop in two hours." Of course being a kid, I could not wait for two hours, I would have surely died of thirst by then. So I wrote the following poem in about thirty minutes. I then recited it as a rap, lol. I am very grateful there are no recordings of me doing this.

    (BTW I had my little brother beat-boxing in the background. lol)  B)

     

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    I sure am thirsty and I need a drink.

    Stop by the store and I think, I'll have a Pepsi, a Coke or 7-UP.

    Doesn't really matter just put it in a cup, with lots of ice and a drink, and it'll all be gone in just one blink.

     

    My dad took the next exit and I got my Big Gulp. :D  Of course we had to stop another thirty minutes after that, so I could go to the bathroom.  :lol:


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    Posted 02 Mar 14 - 11:25 AM

    it's cute!! like when a small girl searching for her lost teddy bear ^^


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