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    Posted 20 May 14 - 01:25 PM

    Here is a poem that I just wrote for you guys! It's in the 'Terza Rima' form which I use a lot.


    Bowling Brothers


    My brothers play Ten-Pin bowling unaware

    That graceless is the action of toppling pins

    In pursuit of a 'Strike'; failing that a 'Spare'


    These four foul men have buzz cuts and double chins

    They wear silk bowling shirts and flat,sliding shoes;

    In fashion terms these are both cardinal sins.


    Preferring lager, they'll drink just any 'booze'

    As they dissect the minutae of their game

    Before stripping off to show off their tattoos.


    Our father ought to bare some of the blame

    For in them he instilled each ungainly trait

    But I dearly wish they had some sense of shame


    Yet I envy them and their bond so innate

    And the chance to join their team I shall await.

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